I think we've all hit that wall where we say, "Holy crap! How the hell do I fill this 6 month gap? Where did this even come from?"
Oh yeah, I've sooooo been there. But instead of letting it drag down my plot, I threw a curve ball at the main characters sister. I knocked her up!
Some events are package deals, with tons of extra scenes included. Here are some good ones:
Getting Married:
This event doesn't have to be a joyous occasion. It could be the characters father marrying a gold-digging tramp half his age. Or maybe it is a good thing, perhaps your MC's parents fall back in love after years of divorce.
- The Proposal
- Dress shopping (for female characters)
- Stag and Hen Parties
- The Wedding day
- The Honeymoon
Death:
This event is generally always a bad thing, but hey it's bound to be eventful.
- The COD (cause of death)
- Trying to save/revive the character
- The emotional fall out
- The funeral
Pregnancy:
Like a wedding, this is not always a happy occasion. One mans bundle of joy is another mans bundle of poop.
- Conception
- Missing her period
- The pregnancy test
- Announcing the news
- Nine whole months of potential disasters! (And a miscarriage is pretty dramatic too.)
- The Birth, of course!
- Parenthood
Divorce:
The MC's best friend? Mom and Dad? Brother? Bitchy boss who totally had it coming?
- The problems that lead up to it
- Breaking the news to the spouse
- Telling friends and family
- The awkward period before the move
- Moving out
- The court battles
Affairs:
Now this could be it's own book, but it could also be that little spicy element you need to punch up your story.
- The red flags
- The deteriorating relationship
- The discovery
- The confrontation or confession
- The fall out (make up or break up)
- How things turn out with the "other man/woman"
Now, these are huge events that might not work into your main characters path. But to have a secondary character go through it is eventful enough to keep the plot moving without throwing your story off track.
However...
It's a very fine line. Adding a new story line should move the main plot forward, not lead you off on a tangent. I chose to knock up my MC's baby sister because it was the catalyst I was looking for.
So tell me, what kinds of events have you used to spice it up? Are you struggling with a sagging middle?
So tell me, what kinds of events have you used to spice it up? Are you struggling with a sagging middle?



Hmm... these are some good tips.
ReplyDeleteI'm actually not sure if my story got round to sagging...
Here's hoping that the lack of news is good.
:-)
You have some really fun examples. Just remember to make it fit into the novel as a whole, though! I did something similar and introduced a new character that my critters really liked ... but who did nothing but slow down the real meat of the story. I now have to excise her ... which is a shame because she was very cool.
ReplyDelete@ Shannon: I know, I played with so many ideas, and then it slapped me in the face. It was the perfect catalyst.
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